The Claws of Stovokor by @Helixfungus

Karden System

This a nice and clean map.




Good trigger work.

Optional combat is nice.

I like how you put the mining facility inside the broken planet.



Excellent work on the maintenance tunnels.


High Energy Yield


Very nice job on making it look like yer in space at the end.


Canberra Bridge

Nothing major to note.


Nebula Core

Nothing major to note.

This was a nice mission with an interesting plot. I did feel that the typos made the start a little rough. I know we discussed before how English is not your primary language, but I would suggest taking the chance to go back and run the dialogues through spell checkers, ETC.

4/5, great job, look forward to more of your work.